Paragraph writing

Welcome back guys,
On are school we had been talking about paragraphs in our writing. When you have paragraphs it is much easier to read but when you don't it will make it harder to read. So we choose a topic sentences and write about it. We have to explain details about are writing and making a example or an information about that writing. We have to make are writing more stronger so it make senses. Here is the work that I made.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               A very unusual face suddenly appeared in the window. He face look like scary. its doesn’t have eyes mouth nose and ears its face was just blank with white. When I turn around and look at the window he gets closer and closer to the window. When He gets closer my hands started to shake and my eyes began to have tears. When I looked at the window again he vanished then when I turned around it was behind me. Suddenly I get a small mirror and placed it to his face then crack the mirror.

My character writing

Hello guys,
In are school are writing for this week was creating a introduction, paragraphs and conclusion. First we talk about are habitat next one is what do they look like, what do they wear, how tall they are and what weapons they have. We need to wrote down a strong sentences about conclusion for example overall my character has a powerful strength with invisibility and to ran fast.  On are intro we don't have to write plenty of detains we just need to write who they and where they belong. I will show you what iv'e done on my writing.

Intro:  Mamons belongs to a species of magical trees, mythical creatures that live on invisible floating clouds.  

My incredible habitat has a white invisible cloud floating in the sky with talking flowers, trees that blew leaves around the sky, flying animals with wings and a blowing fire dragon. And also floating horizontal road line that is color blue.  

My character  has a nose that look likes a tiger, three Big eyes like a binocular, two long ears so he knows what are they hearing and what is going on, red lip, tiny sharp gold teeth so they can eat stuff when its uncook, curve eyebrow and short hair. He wears a white silver t-shirt  with armour inside it and helmet with horn and silver pants with armour also. He has green skin colour with blue veins and orange stripe like a zebra on the arm.

My character is six foot tall with big body and  full of enormous muscle. It’s abilities is to run fast and turn to invisible so they can’t see my character. My character weapons are a spear that is pointy on the front and a unbreakable shield that comes back to you when to throw it like a boomerang.

Overall my character has a powerful strength with invisibility and to ran fast. Would you like to meet my character one day?

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solving fraction

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From the last few weeks we were doing some fraction. We have to answer the question with are partner. We have to use a different pencil or pen so the teacher will know who done it. We need to explain how we solve it if are partner doesn't know how to solve it. 

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Fairy tale venn diagram

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This week we have been doing a Venn diagram of the three fairy tales. We need to write what compare all the three fairy tales. We had to read the story of the three little pig, Jack and the beanstalk and The three Goldilocks and add them to the Venn diagram.  I will show you what we done from are Venn diagram.

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Jack and the beanstalk Mindmup

Hi guys,
In our school we have been creating a mindmup and we have to describe Jack. We need to use some key words to describe Jack. And we need to read another version of Jack and the beanstalk. I will show you what I've done in my mindmup. Sorry I can't make it bigger.

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Fraction's

Hi guys,
Last week we had been doing some maths question of fraction in our school. We need to solve question with are buddy. We made a DLO of fractions and we need to solve them and explained how we did it. Here is My DLO fraction.



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Teacher on strike

Hi guys,

We've been talking about teacher going on strike in our school. All of the primary schools will go on strike on August 15. And we also made a DLO of it why on earth the teacher are going on strike.

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My Hotspot doc

Hi today,
In the last few weeks we did some writing in our hot spot doc in our school. So here i'm going to show you what I have been writing in my Hotspot doc. 

The rain slap the window with sharp splattering sound. Spat , spat spat on the slimy skinny stinky glass. Spat, spat, spat against the gigantic window. Spat, spat, spat the lonely manor tucked into the wooded hillside.

My breath made a Massive puffs with white vapour in the dim attic. The vapour puffs curled like dancing genies in the dim light from the rain streaked window. I shivered and tucked my knees against my chest, then curled into a clumsy ball on the rickety makeshifter bed-the sole piece of furniture in that dreadful attic.

I was starving.

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'The three little pig's wondering'

Hi today,

Im going to show you what we have been doing last week from our school. We have to write things that we thought after reading the story. And we need to make it in our own words.


I wonder if the a third little pig will die for killing the wolf to death. I wonder if the third little pig will eat all the food that he get. Maybe if the wolf's grandma will stay alive she will eat the third little pig and blow his house. Maybe when the third little pig ate the wolf his brother,sister, mum and dad will burn the third little pig's house and eat him for their grandma. I when the  wolf eat the first and the second little pig maybe when the third little pig boiled him with hot water they where still alive in his tummy. I wonder when the wolf try to eat the first and second little pig they will run to the third little pig's house so their safe. 

What is a fraction

Good day,
From last Friday we've been learning about fraction and what is fraction. Fraction is any part of a group and a number or a whole. The Numerator is how many you need to colour in or shade and the Denominator is how many pieces you have to cut. I will show you it.

The three little pig's

Hi guy's,
In the past few week in our reading we've been talking about what is Protagonist and the antagonist means. Protagonist means the good guy and the antagonist is the Villain or the bad guy. I will show you the 1 things that I've done. In the fake story of the three little pig the third little pig is the protagonist. But in the real story the wolf was the Protagonist because he was just asking for a cup of sugar to make a cake for her granny.