In the last few weeks we did some writing in our hot spot doc in our school. So here i'm going to show you what I have been writing in my Hotspot doc.
The rain slap the window with sharp splattering sound. Spat , spat spat on the slimy skinny stinky glass. Spat, spat, spat against the gigantic window. Spat, spat, spat the lonely manor tucked into the wooded hillside.
My breath made a Massive puffs with white vapour in the dim attic. The vapour puffs curled like dancing genies in the dim light from the rain streaked window. I shivered and tucked my knees against my chest, then curled into a clumsy ball on the rickety makeshifter bed-the sole piece of furniture in that dreadful attic.
I was starving.
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