Today's blog post is quiet late because this writing was from last week. We are learning to:
- Explode moments in our writing
- Provide as much details as possible
- Use strong ideas when writing.
Our task was to write about one event that you liked or wan't to tell a story about. And then choose a moment in time of what you are doing in that event. For my writing I picked zones athletics and the moment in time was me throwing the discus.
I really like this writing because I put lots of work into it and add lots of details in one peace of idea.
Why we are writing about exploding a moment?
- Good writers explode the moment by writing about a brief moment with as much details as possible so it is almost like it being describe in slow motion.
What we should think about?
- How I can add more details?
- Which language features can I use?
- How can I make this stronger?
Here is my writing:
"Please leave a comment if you enjoy my blog post, make sure it has a positive, helpful and thoughtful comment.
Question of the day:
Have you guys been impressed in your writing because you did something to improve?
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